Monday, October 13, 2014

devour

do you mind
if i devour you?
you are like
a bright yellow
egg yolk.
when i am
nearest you
i feel
the sun.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Rachel, Deborah Forman, author of Paint Lab. I read that you did all 52 lessons in book. Wow! Thanks for the nice review! I love this poem here, and the micro/macro imagery.

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  2. The imagery and the words you chose to use and the feeling it evokes are breathtaking. I love it, Rachel.

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